This was absolutely brilliant Jack. Engrossing and well written. I looked forward to each chapter. It may help to orientate readers if you put a quick description of each character at the top of each part, as there’s quite a long pause between parts.
This was absolutely brilliant Jack. Engrossing and well written. I looked forward to each chapter. It may help to orientate readers if you put a quick description of each character at the top of each part, as there’s quite a long pause between parts.
Thanks so much Rachel, that's good feedback — I'll consider it going forwards! More folk-horror to come on here later this year ☺️